The social
class issue is one of the most important issue in Chilean society
Firstly,
the distribution of the income is absolutely unequal between the rich people
and the poor one, this fact makes it exist a big gap and differences extremely
important and contributes that the higher social class keep enriching and the
poor people keep getting poorer
In addition,
the power of money makes normal that the rich people discriminate to the poor
ones, this example can be appreciate when a mid-class person goes to a
cataloged high class place and the people see him like a weird person just
because the brand of his clothes and the way he or she looks
Finally in
a recent fact the results of the PSU shows the real differences between this
two far social class where the high class students and schools located in the
east of Santiago get the maximum scores in the test, instead the scores of the
mid and low social classes spread over much of the city are below the national
average. This fact show de inequality in the quality of education where in the
affluent sectors prepare their students to become the job boss while the poor
people study to become the workman. As we can see the differences are too big
and worrisome in the education and converts it from a right to a privilege
where the one who has more can stay with the best
wow, all information that you said shows the differences between this two social class is very big
ResponderBorrarTS: The social class issue is one of the most important issueS in Chilean society
ResponderBorrarSS1:Firstly, the distribution of the income is absolutely unequal between [the] rich people and the poor oneS,
EXP:this fact makes [it exist] a big gap and differences extremely important and contributes that the higher social class keep enriching and the poor people keep getting poorer
SS2:In addition, the power of money makes normal that the rich people discriminate [to] the poor ones,
EX: this [example] can be appreciateD when a midDLE-class person goes to a cataloged high class place and the people see him like a weird person just because the brand of his clothes and the way he or she looks
SS3: Finally in a recent fact the results of the PSU shows the real differences between this two far social classES[,] where the high class students and schools located in the east of Santiago get the maximum scores in the test, instead the scores of the mid and low social classes spread over much of the city are below the national average.
EX:This fact showS de inequality in the quality of education where in the affluent sectors [WHO?]prepare their students to become the job boss while the poor people study to become the workmEn.
C?:As we can see the differences are too big and worrisome in the education and converts it from a right to a privilege where the one who has more can stay with the best.
Daniel, You should introduce your conclusion and make it coherent with your introduction. Your intro does not mention education.