I am a
multifacetical person and i have a lot of hobbies to do in my free times. First
of all i like sports so much especially football, in my free times i practice
with my classmates on the football team of FAU, we usually plays on Wednesday
when the classes are over. I also plays a lot of instruments like the guitar
and the drums but my favourite instrument is the bass, i play every weekend
with my band and it is very fun to me and my mates, we spend a lot of greats
moments when we are in the stage. In addition i am a big fan of videogames,
every time i have a free time i play videogames in my house with my Friends, we
play games like FIFA 17 and Call of Duty, my Friends and i can spend a lot of
hours playing Playstation. Finally i practice martial arts with my brother, it
is very tough and difficult, he is very strict with me and he always want to do
my best in each training.
As a student of geography it is very dificult to
have free time, but i always find a Little of time so i can do all of this
activities and hobbies and for that I say that i am a multifacetical person.
I'm shoked by the amount of hobbies you have! It sound fun c:
ResponderBorrarhow do you have time for all hobies?
ResponderBorrarYou are a graet man
Daniel,
ResponderBorrarThe Pronoun "I" is written with CAPITAL LETTER.
The structure of your text is OK, but you edition in terms of grammar and lexis needs much more work.
TS: I am a [multifacetical] MULTIFACETED person and [i] I have a lot of hobbies to do in my free times.
SS1: First of all [i] I like sports so much especially football,
EXP: in my free times [i] I practice with my classmates FROM FAU'S [on the] football team [of FAU],
EXP: we usually play[s] on Wednesday when [the] classes are over.
SS2: I also play[s] a lot of instruments like the guitar and the drums but my favourite instrument is the bass,
EXP: [i] I play every weekend with my band and it is very fun [to] FOR me and my mates, we spend a lot of greats moments when we are [in the] ON stage.
SS3: In addition [i] I am a big fan of videogames, every time [i] I have [a] SOME free time [i] I play videogames [in my house] AT HIOME with my Friends,
EXP: we play games like FIFA 17 and Call of Duty, my Friends and [i] I can spend a lot of hours playing Playstation.
Finally [i] I practice martial arts with my brother, it is very tough and difficult,
EXP: he is very strict with me and he always want to do my best in each training.
C: as a student of geography it is very difFicult to have free time, but [i] I always find a [L]little [of] time so [i] can do all of [this] THESE activities and hobbies and for that I say that [i] am a multifacetED[ical] person.