Hi again
everyone, in this post i would like to share you my experiences in my holidays.
I hope you had a very beautifull moments too in your holidays.
My
vacations begin in february 12' when my girlfriend and i visited coquimbo in
the 4th region in Chile, we went to many places like the beach, El faro of la
serena, we visited La portada stadium and francisco sanchez rumoroso stadium,
they both are football stadiums were plays the locals team of la serena and
coquimbo respectively, we went to the moroccan mosque were we knows about
the moroccan culture and traditions.
After a few
days we went to a camping in a place call Valle del elqui, specifically in
Paihuano, we swim in a river, play tennis, and have a lot of fun.
This
holidays was amazing and unforgetable. In our next holidays we are planed to
visit the south of chile in searching of new adventures and experiences
Hi Nitolio! your vacation sounds so good!! it's awesome visit places with people who loves, I visited 4th region too! I went to Cochiguaz (Valle del Elqui) and was unfortgettable, regards comrade c:
ResponderBorrarsee you in another life brotha
WC: 160. That’s definitely not enough. You were requested to write 200 words. Make sure you follow the instructions next time.
ResponderBorrarNice holidays, but you need to dedicate more time to your text. What’s with the capital letters? You know all proper names take CAPITALS. The same with the Subject Pronoun “I”. If you narrate a past experience, you use the Past Simple…
…i would like to share WITH you my experiences
…I hope you had (a) very (beautifull) moments 2)too 1)in your holidays.…
……My vacations begAin in february 12TH when my girlfriend and (i ) I visited
…they both are football stadiums wHere 3) play(s) 1)the locals team of la Sserena and Ccoquimbo 2)respectively, we went to the Mmoroccan mosque were we knew(s ) about the Mmoroccan culture and traditions.…
After a few days we went (to) ON a camping in a place callED Valle del Eelqui, specifically in Paihuano, we swAim in a river, playED tennis, and (have) HAD a lot of fun.
This holidays was amazing and unforgetable. In our next holidays we are planed to visit the south of chile in searching of new adventures and experiences
Cheers,